Post #7 Civil War in Florida

I worked in joint with Lauren Whitmore in the researching and writing of this photo album. Civil War in Florida Photo Essay

Comments

[Vernon Eppard]

Your Photo album looked great and depicted why Flrida was so important.

You may want to think about a timeline while doing a photo album. Florida withdrew from the nation before any battle took place. It may seem like a small detail but it loses some of your credibility when you make such a simple mistake.

You also describe your pictures somewhat inaccurately. You state "From this picture one can see how this was a major Confederate victory." This is not true. We can see that it was a victory and that it demonstrates your point that there were many wounded however it does not depict any importance of the battle.

My final suggestion is to focus more on why Florida was important. It took up quite a bit of space in your introduction and should have taken up more space in the actual post.

[Mark Sythammavong]

Great photo gallery, I especially liked how you mentioned the specific details in each photo and its relevance to your post.
The thesis should be bolded/underlined. It seems you focused more on how the Confederates defended Florida very well against the Union army, rather than the importance of Florida itself. Also, the last image seems to have little to do with Florida itself. Nevertheless, you picked an interesting state to research and hope to see more to come!

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